Hi guys I am back and today I am going to be showing you my song. The challenging thing about this was comming up with words. Thank you for reading here is my song.
hi Danielle it Sofaia your best friend i really like your song about camp but next time don't be shy like what Noah said but really good rapping Danielle
Hi Danielle Its me Lillian same school and class.I really liked how you created a rap cause I can´t.This reminds me of listening to famous rappers and maybe next time you can pronounce the words properly and say them properly. BYYYY comment to ya later!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Danielle i am Richard from your class i will just like to say that was pretty good and that was a little bit to squeaky but who cares.This rimmed of me when i listened to a song like this.Next time think of if it was tricky to try and post that.Bye Richard
Hi Danielle its me Toeumu :D. I really loved how you made that creative rap/song. It was really entertaining and really really funny. This reminds me that i love doing raps with my friends Santana you and some other people. Maybe next time you could make it show your face. Blog you later!
Hi Danielle it is me Daphne. I really like how you wrote your own song ,but can you make sure that you listen be for you post because it was a little noise. But it was good and next time can you make sure that you tell us what it's about, anyways good job i like your rap and have a good day.
HI THAT was a good song this makes me want to make a song but next time dont be shie
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Deletehi Danielle it is teairi of cause you no what school i am in it was good
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ReplyDeletei mean for real good comment
Deletehi Danielle it Sofaia your best friend i really like your song about camp but next time don't be shy like what Noah said but really good rapping Danielle
ReplyDeleteOh thanks for the feedback.
DeleteHi Danielle Its me Lillian same school and class.I really liked how you created a rap cause I can´t.This reminds me of listening to famous rappers and maybe next time you can pronounce the words properly and say them properly. BYYYY comment to ya later!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Danielle i am Richard from your class i will just like to say that was pretty good and that was a little bit to squeaky but who cares.This rimmed of me when i listened to a song like this.Next time think of if it was tricky to try and post that.Bye Richard
ReplyDeletehi im from your school i really like your rap it good just work on not saying what the heck thanks bye
ReplyDeleteHi Danielle its me Toeumu :D. I really loved how you made that creative rap/song. It was really entertaining and really really funny.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me that i love doing raps with my friends Santana you and some other people. Maybe next time you could make it show your face. Blog you later!
Toeumu :D
Hi Danielle it is me Daphne. I really like how you wrote your own song ,but can you make sure that you listen be for you post because it was a little noise. But it was good and next time can you make sure that you tell us what it's about, anyways good job i like your rap and have a good day.
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